I will do this by writing in the stage directions.
Scriptwriting Term 3
Wednesday, 18 March 2015
Using sound
I want to use sounds of planes and birds throughout the play to corrilate with my theme of chemtrails. I feel it's a nice contrast to the whirlwind world that the characters are living, as nature is pure and soft and their lives are hard.
Tuesday, 17 March 2015
Location ideas
Seeing locations visually really helps me imagine and visualise the world that the characters are living in and the world i have to bring to stage.
Written scenes
Writing out scenes and experimenting with ideas has really helped me Lucy and Scarlet as characters, giving them certain traits and sayings. For example Scarlet swears a lot and always says fuck it and Lucy often talks politically and is shut down by Scarlet and always drinks mango juice.
Pancake tits scene
Sticky Story board
In my workshop i created a sticky story board in which everyone could write down an experience in which they had been made to do something they didn't want to or had been manipulated. I wanted them to write down how it made them feel and a possible quote they can remember.I found this extremely useful as i was looking for situations in which Scarlet could papillate my other character Lucy.

This gave me an idea to write a scene where scarlet makes Lucy send out a rumour or pictures to people and lucy feels guilty.
This helped me see how Scarlet could make a comment on Lucy's clothes and pressure her to wear certain things.
This comment made me feel sad as sometimes it's your friends who can make comments that make you feel self conscious. I very much felt like this is something my character scarlet would do. This has also inspired another scene.
This is an extreme and was interesting to see how someone that i know, from my class had to go through this. I realised pressured violence amongst friends could be more common then i realised. This has made me think about how scarlet could potently make Lucy do something physically violent towards someone.
I can imagine this as the breaking point for Lucy.
Wednesday, 11 March 2015
Workshop notes - Write up
Movement
- Shaking hands
- Moving and controlling of victims head
- Licking
- Biting
- Pushing, pulling, grabbing
- Engulfing
- Hurting
- Grabbing of the neck
- Flipping in the air
- Hold down.
Key words
- Empowered
- Scared
- Vulnerabile
- Groped
- Exited
- Enjoyment
- Suffocating
- Gas
Actors quotes
"the toxic friend smothers you and the other person is blind"
"feeding alcohol and drugs"
"when you tried to resist or fight off the toxics it got worse"
"you have to view it in a non literal way rather than a literal way"
"drawing the other person in with kindness"
"sly, underlying violence"
"power in numbers, because everyone else was hiring the victim it felt okay to hurt her more"
Positions for scene
Lying down heads next to each other
Side by side, one knee up
Improvisation quotes
"if your that bothered about it why don't you go to the government and write a letter"
"kind of like a fag then - you need one"
Thursday, 26 February 2015
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